Considering these are your first attempts and then you went on to draw that amazing lion you should be very proud of yourself. Most people take a long, long time to master biro. You've jumped straight in and nailed it.
Well, thank you, it's really nice to read a real well thought comment.. I was really not used to such sensitive material, so the first eye as you can see in picture was really bad.. I still did a few mistakes in the lion but think it was good considering I'm only starting... Thank you again for the comment (: